lizbee: (Avatar: Mai)
lizbee ([personal profile] lizbee) wrote 2011-08-20 05:07 am (UTC)

I had SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH THE ENDING. (That it was off seems to have been the recurring theme in all my feedback, positive and negative, so I'm going to see if I can retool it in the future.)

But thank you! I'm glad you found it believable, especially.
(14 comments)

Post a comment in response:

If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.