This was great! I love the ending. I also had a feeling that this instalment would involve Chang losing and eye, but I am gratified as to how it played out.

I actually introduced him complete with iconic eyepatch, and only after a few thousand words, realised that this was an excellent opportunity to show how he gets it. After that, it was just a matter of working out whether Philippa or Kat took it, and Philippa had her hand full.

I liked Mogh a lot.

I basically imagined him as a young Michael Dorn in Disco!Klingon style, and he more or less wrote himself.