Date: 2010-04-12 07:59 am (UTC)
liviapenn: "I can't believe I'm condoning the use of my snake in laying a man-trap" (atlantis: snake laying a man-trap)
From: [personal profile] liviapenn

It was so bad. It was like... a cargo cult, but for fiction. "I'm doing all the right stuff! It'll be dramatic and moving and tragic any second now!" Oh, wait, your hero is a cheerful sociopath and his sister is a random, unlikable plot device, so it's just sort of... disturbingly flat.
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